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		<title>Comment on Guest Post by Patty Jansen: On Finishing What You Start by Alex J. Kane</title>
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		<dc:creator>Alex J. Kane</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 15 Feb 2012 00:41:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Yeah, a lot of contemporary stuff is very much steeped in the internal, whereas we tend as readers to enjoy both external conflicts (i.e. action, explosions, etc.) and internal conflicts as well. A lot of readers -- perhaps because of the quality of the writing -- look at an internal development plot, and simply see no story at all. You can&#039;t blame them, I suppose, because in a way that&#039;s a very narrow view of literature...and if we&#039;re not careful, we can run those tropes right into the ground in a hurry.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yeah, a lot of contemporary stuff is very much steeped in the internal, whereas we tend as readers to enjoy both external conflicts (i.e. action, explosions, etc.) and internal conflicts as well. A lot of readers &#8212; perhaps because of the quality of the writing &#8212; look at an internal development plot, and simply see no story at all. You can&#8217;t blame them, I suppose, because in a way that&#8217;s a very narrow view of literature&#8230;and if we&#8217;re not careful, we can run those tropes right into the ground in a hurry.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Guest Post by Patty Jansen: On Finishing What You Start by Patrick S. McGinnity</title>
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		<dc:creator>Patrick S. McGinnity</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 14 Feb 2012 21:58:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I am the classic non-finisher.  Lately  I&#039;ve finished my first full-fleged genre story, and have since (due in part to a dearth of new ideas) picked up an early draft of an old, unsuccessful story to turn into an actual story.  I think part of my problem is that, even though I had the classic genre diet growing up, I went to school to study creative writing, and the combination of &quot;literary&quot; fiction&#039;s focus on the prose itself and mimetic fiction&#039;s favoring of unresolved resolutions made me forget what a story actually looks like.  The first of those is a &quot;forest for the trees&quot; issue, and I can&#039;t tell you how many rejections have said basically: &quot;really good writing, but no story/plot.&quot;  The second is something I struggle with every time.  Thanks for the great posting!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I am the classic non-finisher.  Lately  I&#8217;ve finished my first full-fleged genre story, and have since (due in part to a dearth of new ideas) picked up an early draft of an old, unsuccessful story to turn into an actual story.  I think part of my problem is that, even though I had the classic genre diet growing up, I went to school to study creative writing, and the combination of &#8220;literary&#8221; fiction&#8217;s focus on the prose itself and mimetic fiction&#8217;s favoring of unresolved resolutions made me forget what a story actually looks like.  The first of those is a &#8220;forest for the trees&#8221; issue, and I can&#8217;t tell you how many rejections have said basically: &#8220;really good writing, but no story/plot.&#8221;  The second is something I struggle with every time.  Thanks for the great posting!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Guest Post by Patty Jansen: On Finishing What You Start by Michael Hodges</title>
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		<dc:creator>Michael Hodges</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 09 Feb 2012 22:55:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Good advice, Patty. And congrats on the novels. I think I&#039;ll scoop up Fire and Ice via Kindle.

Personally, I&#039;m a fan of finishing no matter what and fighting through what you have. At its core, this discipline is what separates a novelist from a short story writer. True, you don&#039;t want to get bogged down with bad ideas, weak characters, and tired plots, but it’s the act of writing that moves you away from such things. The more you write novels, the better you&#039;ll be at writing novels. I think it took King four or five novels before Carrie, and he&#039;s just one of many examples. I wonder how many he trashed. I think he did actually trash Carrie at one point.

If the book sucks, at least you wrote a novel. That&#039;s a badge to pin on your chest. In this day and age with diminishing attention spans and countless distractions, it&#039;s a major accomplishment. Not many people actually finish a novel. There&#039;s a litany of excuses. We&#039;ve heard them all. If the novel blows, oh well. Go on to the next one. And when you do get published down the road, you can re-work your finished novels that didn&#039;t sell, or cannibalize them. 

It&#039;s said way too much, but everyone is unique and needs to find a method that works best for them. If stopping halfway through a novel and moving to another helps a writer improve, then go for it. For me, I&#039;d start entering paralysis by analysis. I&#039;d probably also develop a habitat of dropping a lot of projects because of a tastier looking idea--especially when I wasn&#039;t as enthused about the project for a few days (which happens, so add something to the story or characters that gets your juices flowing again). Again, that goes back to the attention span issue, and we&#039;re not all created equal there. Some people can sit through 2001: A Space Odyssey, while others squirm in their seats.

For me, it’s about the discipline, about sitting down every day and meeting that word count. Inherent in this process is writing a beginning, middle, and ending.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Good advice, Patty. And congrats on the novels. I think I&#8217;ll scoop up Fire and Ice via Kindle.</p>
<p>Personally, I&#8217;m a fan of finishing no matter what and fighting through what you have. At its core, this discipline is what separates a novelist from a short story writer. True, you don&#8217;t want to get bogged down with bad ideas, weak characters, and tired plots, but it’s the act of writing that moves you away from such things. The more you write novels, the better you&#8217;ll be at writing novels. I think it took King four or five novels before Carrie, and he&#8217;s just one of many examples. I wonder how many he trashed. I think he did actually trash Carrie at one point.</p>
<p>If the book sucks, at least you wrote a novel. That&#8217;s a badge to pin on your chest. In this day and age with diminishing attention spans and countless distractions, it&#8217;s a major accomplishment. Not many people actually finish a novel. There&#8217;s a litany of excuses. We&#8217;ve heard them all. If the novel blows, oh well. Go on to the next one. And when you do get published down the road, you can re-work your finished novels that didn&#8217;t sell, or cannibalize them. </p>
<p>It&#8217;s said way too much, but everyone is unique and needs to find a method that works best for them. If stopping halfway through a novel and moving to another helps a writer improve, then go for it. For me, I&#8217;d start entering paralysis by analysis. I&#8217;d probably also develop a habitat of dropping a lot of projects because of a tastier looking idea&#8211;especially when I wasn&#8217;t as enthused about the project for a few days (which happens, so add something to the story or characters that gets your juices flowing again). Again, that goes back to the attention span issue, and we&#8217;re not all created equal there. Some people can sit through 2001: A Space Odyssey, while others squirm in their seats.</p>
<p>For me, it’s about the discipline, about sitting down every day and meeting that word count. Inherent in this process is writing a beginning, middle, and ending.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Guest Post by Patty Jansen: On Finishing What You Start by Martin L. Shoemaker</title>
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		<dc:creator>Martin L. Shoemaker</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 09 Feb 2012 16:26:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for this, Patty! And thanks, Alex, for inviting her!

My problem lately is idea overload. After a bit of a drought, I now find myself coming up with three or four new ideas for every one I finish. I even came up with one perfectly logical story from a dream, and my dreams normally have no logic to them. And sometimes the new idea (like that dream) is so compelling I have to put down a story that I like. That dream story distracted me for three days, turning into an even better story. And when it was done, almost immediately another story demanded my attention. Yet there&#039;s another perfectly good story sitting on the back burner, one I&#039;m almost as eager to finish.

If I have to have a writing problem, too many ideas is a good one; but I think it also means I don&#039;t have enough writing time.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for this, Patty! And thanks, Alex, for inviting her!</p>
<p>My problem lately is idea overload. After a bit of a drought, I now find myself coming up with three or four new ideas for every one I finish. I even came up with one perfectly logical story from a dream, and my dreams normally have no logic to them. And sometimes the new idea (like that dream) is so compelling I have to put down a story that I like. That dream story distracted me for three days, turning into an even better story. And when it was done, almost immediately another story demanded my attention. Yet there&#8217;s another perfectly good story sitting on the back burner, one I&#8217;m almost as eager to finish.</p>
<p>If I have to have a writing problem, too many ideas is a good one; but I think it also means I don&#8217;t have enough writing time.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Reading Journal, January 2012 by Michael Hodges</title>
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		<dc:creator>Michael Hodges</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 03 Feb 2012 23:15:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Good plan, Alex.

I just finished Blood Meridian, and I&#039;m close to saying it&#039;s the best thing I&#039;ve ever read.

I&#039;ll have to pick up a copy of Game of Thrones.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Good plan, Alex.</p>
<p>I just finished Blood Meridian, and I&#8217;m close to saying it&#8217;s the best thing I&#8217;ve ever read.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ll have to pick up a copy of Game of Thrones.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Reading Journal, January 2012 by Alex J. Kane</title>
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		<dc:creator>Alex J. Kane</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 30 Jan 2012 18:06:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Did the drink thing, with two Dos Equis. Totally worked! Thanks for the suggestion. Still don&#039;t entirely understand what the hell&#039;s going on 100% of the time, but it&#039;s much better with a little drink in my blood. Plus, I need an excuse to start drinking -- I never do, but on those rare occasions it helps me unwind and kills my unhealthy buildup of stress. School might&#039;ve killed me this semester, but now I know that drinking on occasion will help a lot. So thanks!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Did the drink thing, with two Dos Equis. Totally worked! Thanks for the suggestion. Still don&#8217;t entirely understand what the hell&#8217;s going on 100% of the time, but it&#8217;s much better with a little drink in my blood. Plus, I need an excuse to start drinking &#8212; I never do, but on those rare occasions it helps me unwind and kills my unhealthy buildup of stress. School might&#8217;ve killed me this semester, but now I know that drinking on occasion will help a lot. So thanks!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Reading Journal, January 2012 by Eileen - Science Fiction Mommy</title>
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		<dc:creator>Eileen - Science Fiction Mommy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 28 Jan 2012 08:28:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>What are you talking about?  Midsummer Night&#039;s Dream is loads of fun.  Have you ever seen it performed?  Performed well?  Let me make one suggestion:  have a drink first.  And no, I&#039;m not badmouthing Shakespeare by saying this.  The language has changed but there&#039;s plenty there to get through the rest based on context.  The problem is that most people overthink it.  I remember an ex-coworker telling me that he enjoyed a Shakespeare play a lot more after intermission, after he&#039;d had some alcohol--and there is method to that madness.  After a drink or two (or more, depending on how much you drink regularly) you become less inhibited and less likely to get caught up on that *one word* you didn&#039;t get, which you thought about for a few seconds before giving up on, during which time you missed the next few things that happened.  Shakespeare is meant to be watched anyway, not read, but after you watch it, it will be easier to read back through and understand it better.

btw, I love Shakespeare!  He rocks!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>What are you talking about?  Midsummer Night&#8217;s Dream is loads of fun.  Have you ever seen it performed?  Performed well?  Let me make one suggestion:  have a drink first.  And no, I&#8217;m not badmouthing Shakespeare by saying this.  The language has changed but there&#8217;s plenty there to get through the rest based on context.  The problem is that most people overthink it.  I remember an ex-coworker telling me that he enjoyed a Shakespeare play a lot more after intermission, after he&#8217;d had some alcohol&#8211;and there is method to that madness.  After a drink or two (or more, depending on how much you drink regularly) you become less inhibited and less likely to get caught up on that *one word* you didn&#8217;t get, which you thought about for a few seconds before giving up on, during which time you missed the next few things that happened.  Shakespeare is meant to be watched anyway, not read, but after you watch it, it will be easier to read back through and understand it better.</p>
<p>btw, I love Shakespeare!  He rocks!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Reading Journal, January 2012 by Ben Godby</title>
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		<dc:creator>Ben Godby</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 27 Jan 2012 17:08:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Man, stopping in the middle of non-interesting books is not a bad thing. They&#039;re not interesting. Granted, it&#039;s worth pushing on through 20 or 30 pages usually, just to see if there&#039;s a hump. That&#039;s precisely what just happened to me in the reading of &quot;Cloud Atlas,&quot; and I&#039;m glad I stayed on. But, I gotta say, I ditch a lot of books, and I don&#039;t regret it.

Looking forward to more journal entries/mini reviews!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Man, stopping in the middle of non-interesting books is not a bad thing. They&#8217;re not interesting. Granted, it&#8217;s worth pushing on through 20 or 30 pages usually, just to see if there&#8217;s a hump. That&#8217;s precisely what just happened to me in the reading of &#8220;Cloud Atlas,&#8221; and I&#8217;m glad I stayed on. But, I gotta say, I ditch a lot of books, and I don&#8217;t regret it.</p>
<p>Looking forward to more journal entries/mini reviews!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Writing Goals 2012 by Alex J. Kane</title>
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		<dc:creator>Alex J. Kane</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 21 Jan 2012 03:40:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Michael, thanks for the encouragement. That self-awareness you&#039;re talking about is a double-edged sword, which leads to a lot of self-doubt and depression, but it does fuel my writing drive as well, so hopefully I can find a balance.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Michael, thanks for the encouragement. That self-awareness you&#8217;re talking about is a double-edged sword, which leads to a lot of self-doubt and depression, but it does fuel my writing drive as well, so hopefully I can find a balance.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Writing Goals 2012 by Alex J. Kane</title>
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		<dc:creator>Alex J. Kane</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 21 Jan 2012 03:38:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks, Dawn! I&#039;m thinking the writing goals will be easy until I start focusing on the novel again... There&#039;s a good chance that I&#039;ll feel like writing a lot of short stories by the time school&#039;s over -- especially if I get into Clarion, Clarion West, or Odyssey. So the novel might get chopped down into a short story, or several, until I get a few more sales under my belt. I don&#039;t think my love of the idea will fade over time, so giving myself time to outline and brainstorm some more won&#039;t hurt. Just have to make sure I stay productive in one form or another, and even if I focus on short stories for the next five or six months, that&#039;ll still give me plenty of time to finish the novel by the end of 2012.

Guess this means I need to get started on my January story. Yikes!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks, Dawn! I&#8217;m thinking the writing goals will be easy until I start focusing on the novel again&#8230; There&#8217;s a good chance that I&#8217;ll feel like writing a lot of short stories by the time school&#8217;s over &#8212; especially if I get into Clarion, Clarion West, or Odyssey. So the novel might get chopped down into a short story, or several, until I get a few more sales under my belt. I don&#8217;t think my love of the idea will fade over time, so giving myself time to outline and brainstorm some more won&#8217;t hurt. Just have to make sure I stay productive in one form or another, and even if I focus on short stories for the next five or six months, that&#8217;ll still give me plenty of time to finish the novel by the end of 2012.</p>
<p>Guess this means I need to get started on my January story. Yikes!</p>
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